Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, April 16, 2021
The wayfinder five sentence
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Fantastic 5 sentence story Ayla! You covered the story really well just in these 5 sentences. I liked your line about reading the stars and the clouds like words in a book. I would suggest for next time you are careful with your background so we can easily read what you have written. Keep up the brilliant work Ayla and I will wait to see what you blog next.
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